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My flesh-it begins to change,
I feel them crawling inside of me,
Hopeless and lifeless in my shell,
Anxiety it grows inside me,
'Til there is nothing left...
'Til there is nothing left...

They feed on me!
They feed on me!

My brain-it begins to change,
I can't let them win the fear is killing me,
This deviation cannot help,
Anxiety can't grow inside me,
'Til there is nothing left...
'Til there is nothing left...

They feed on me!
They feed on me!
They feed on me!

Where out there can I go now?
I've seen it all fall apart,

Where can there be safe haven,
A safety that I've never known,
Where can I be removed now,
I've seen it all crumble...

The temporary peace can't last,
I feel it start to leave my veins,
There's no beginning, only past,
And it haunts me, it gnaws inside me..

Suppression,
Won't last,
I must be..
The dark apostle!

Suppression,
Won't last,
I must be..
The dark apostle!
©2008-2009 ~MetalPhil
:iconmetalphil:

Author's Comments

Hey, this is my new song from the concept piece I'm working on. Please listen to the full track and tell me what you think. However, I'll explain it's existence in the concept..

The main character, a man who basically wakes up and believes he's in hell, tries his hardest to escape the situation through deviation and drug induced peace. This doesn't work. After months of suffering, avoiding and destroying his life as it was he decides that he must find other deviants who MUST see the world as he does and force them to see: i.e., become The Dark Apostle.

Please, take a listen: [link]

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:iconfcneko:
I listened to the first chorus and find that the imagery is intriguing, but I'm not a fan of this style of music and can't offer any sort of critique (I'm not entirely sure what is expected of such music, so make a terrible critic).

Sounds a lot like Metallica in terms of the music, but with the gutteral rumblings of death metal... Never did really GET that sort of thing... O_o
:iconmetalphil:
Oh man.. you actually missed the best parts. See I have a bad habit of doing 'not so metal' parts in my metal songs.. so you missed the clean vocals and piano and clean guitars.. tee hee! Should've given it a shot all the way through!!

Thanks for listening though, it's appreciated.

--
"To write is human. To edit is divine." - Stephen King

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